The Agency Games

The Agency Games (Peer Review: ROUND TWO)

Alright guys, I did it. I successfully took the comments, compliments, and critiques from my two peer review readers and over the past four weeks, I have edited, revised, dissected, pulled apart, set-on-fire, re-arranged and re-written parts my manuscript.

I won’t lie, that was rough!

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The most recent draft has nearly 4,000 words more than the previous draft which I believe to be a good representation of the amount of scholarship, development, and clarification I have added along the way.  Beyond addressing any grammatical issues, I focused on developing and clarifying my overall argument as well as the individual arguments for each chapter. Also, due to reviewer request, I worked on inserting more outside scholarship to help substantiate my interpretations of The Hunger Games trilogy.

As hard as it was to read those criticisms, I am grateful for them, because I honestly believe that my book is better for it. I sent out my latest draft yesterday evening and am hoping to hear back from the publishers within a week to let me know that they have received it. After that, it will be another 6 to 8 weeks before I hear back from my third reader. Meanwhile, I’ll just be over here like . . .

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I am praying that this reader will have a more favorable response to my improved draft! I would greatly appreciate your prayers as well in this matter as I now have to force myself to not focus on what they may say about my book. I am plagued by anxieties and self-doubts, but I will choose to focus instead on the positive. In the effort to stay optimistic, I wanted to share one of the kinder things one of my readers had to say about my book:

This text takes a different approach [to the series], considering the role of agency in the text . . . Unlike previous scholarship, the writer suggests that these novels can help readers identify opportunities for agency (empowerment) in their own chaotic contexts.

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If only one person in the whole world enjoys my book, that is enough. I am so grateful for this opportunity to pursue my dream and I am so encouraged by each and every one of you! Thank you to everyone for your support and your understanding these past few weeks as I have taken multiple Tuesdays “off” from blogging. While life is still crazy, I hope to become more actively involved in this awesome community!

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Writing Tip: Waiting Out the Waiting Period

Any author or poet who has attempted to go the route of traditional publishing is familiar with that dreaded “waiting period.” You know which one I’m talking about. You spend all your time and effort into creating an amazing story, editing and revising until your eyes are bloodshot and your fingertips are raw.

Then you hit send.

And you wait.

And you wait.

And you wait.

If you are very lucky or very talented (and often a combination of both), you will hear back from the publishers 6-12 months later as they express interest in you or your book. You think, Huzzah! The waiting is over and my book will be published immediately!

Sorry to burst your bubble, but that is not how it works. After that initial waiting period and the good news, you’re in for more waiting periods. Your book will most likely go through several editing phrases and after that you have visual decisions such as cover and formatting. Your book will most likely not be published until a year or two after you hear back.

That is a LOT of waiting.

As someone intimately engulfed within this dreaded waiting period, let me give you some tips on how to survive it:

  1. Take a deep breath and stop opening up your email every single hour of every single day (Seriously, Kayla Ann, stop doing this.) It only makes you more antsy when you fixate on their response.
  2. Get outside and do something. I don’t care if it’s the gym (which is my favorite as it’s a great way to release pent up energy) or a walk with your pup, or minigolf, or going to the beach, or biking, or going to the mall. In some way, get out and do something physical.
  3. Get back inside and do something. (But you just said go outside! Yes, I did, keep reading.) After you have gotten rid of some of that nervous energy and you can actually focus, start working on a different project. Write your next book or create some blogging posts and schedule them for the future.
  4. Take another breath and repeat the steps above. Trust me, you’re going to be waiting for awhile. (I’ve also found that small, but frequent, amounts of chocolate can do wonders for your mood.)

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Anyone else ever been stuck in that waiting period?

How do you pass the time and maintain your flimsy grasp on reality?


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Is WordPress Restricting Your Publishing Options?

A good friend TShaw and I had a great conversation the other day about whether or not posting poems online was a good idea.

I was encouraging her to share some of her amazing poetry but she was concerned that if she posted them online they would be technically “published.” If they were already published, she would be unable to send them to traditional journals and publishing houses.

I had not come across this issue before and so I decided I needed to research it. Here’s what I found and I think you will be interested in the answer as well!

What Is Considered Previously Published Writing?




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Writing Tip: My Research

In the last tip, I encouraged you to do your research. To help demonstrate this point, I will explain my own research when searching for a publishing house to accept my non-fiction analysis of The Hunger Games series.

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This is the home page for McFarland Publishing. Right on the home page there is New Releases and Bestsellers. These categories help give us authors an idea as to what the publishing house is currently interested in signing.

Through reading scholarship on The Hunger Games series, I discovered McFarland Publishing as they have published several scholarly collections on the subject. Knowing this, I visited their site. Going through their menu I saw the “Becoming An Author” tag and visited that page.

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Be sure to thoroughly explore the website. Sometimes it is as easy as looking at a menu bar, sometimes you have to really search for information on submitting your work.

On that page I found everything that I needed to know about what McFarland was looking for, how they wanted it presented, and where.

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Having researched this publishing house, I realized that I could send in a query letter even though I hadn’t started writing my book yet.

Through this research, I was able to better situate myself and my chances at getting published. I targeted my publishing house much like you would choose a target audience. When looking for a publishing house, you want to find someone who is already interested in what you do.

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Happy Writing Everyone!

Feel free to drop my any questions about publishing in the comments. I don’t know everything, but I’ll do my best to provide answers.

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Writing Tip: Do the Research Before Submitting Your Manuscript/Proposal

Once you’ve finished writing your book (or maybe even just an outline), it’s understandable that you would be super excited. It’s normal that you would want to share this grand new idea with others. It’s not surprising that you would want to start sending out that manuscript/proposal/query letters ASAP to all sorts of publishing houses.
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Let me take a moment to encourage you to do your research first. What does that mean?
First, do not find the biggest, baddest, most awesome publishing houses in the country and submit your manuscript without first looking through their submission requirements. Many publishing houses accept a variety of books, however, during certain months or time periods, they are only accepting specific genres. If you send in your fantasy book when they are only accepting horror novels, you can bet that manuscript will end up in the trash without a second glance. Also, when the publishing house gives very clear instructions how on the manuscript is to be sent in, be aware, those are NOT suggestions. They ARE requirements. You might have the world’s next best seller, but if you do not follow the rules, that manuscript once again ends up in the trash.
Second, there is nothing wrong with sending out your query letter/proposal/manuscript to various publishing houses at once, but don’t just send them everywhere without again checking in with the publishing houses. (In fact, some publishing houses request that you make them aware if you are sending your manuscript out to other houses). Look through their best sellers and what they are currently selling. This should give you an idea as to what that publishing house is looking for. If all they are currently publishing is non-fiction, they will not be interested in your book of poetry.
In other words, do the work. Put in the time and effort and research multiple publishing houses to enhance your chances of getting signed!

Happy Writing Everyone!

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All You Need to Know About Self-Publishing: An Interview with Gavin Whyte


In the hopes of sharing knowledge with fellow writers, I sought out someone with experience in self-publishing. Gavin Whyte does a really great job at covering the basics of self-publishing, the ups and the downs! So if you want an honest opinion on self-publishing, be sure to take a read!

K. Why did you decide to go into self-publishing?

The truth is: lack of patience and the need for instant gratification. Not ideal attributes for an author, I admit. When I self-published my first book, back in 2010, I just wanted to get it out there as soon as possible. I was naive, to say the least. I had no prior experience of the publishing industry, and the first book I published was the first book I wrote – ever.
Now I would advise any writer that is just starting out to write, write, write, and as soon as you have finished one book, start your next one. Doesn’t Neil Gaiman say to imagine you have a million words you need to get off your chest first, before anything good comes out?

Just to show how naive I was, one of the things that attracted me the most about self-publishing was the fact that you got to cut out the middle man. This is the publisher and/or the literary agent. These people supposedly take a long time to get back to you, and I simply wasn’t willing to wait.

Moreover, I’d heard they are so swamped with submissions, that the chances of them taking on a new writer are slim. Self-publishing was an attractive option from the start, mainly because it was free. I learned earlier on that if a publisher asks you to pay a fee in advance, then walk away – fast. So called “vanity publishers” are sharks, looking for writers with little experience and big dreams.

I was attracted to the idea that I could have my book published in the same afternoon I finished writing it (although it’s not a good idea to do that). I was attracted to the fact that I would be in control of the creative process, from designing the cover to deciding the price.

The traditional route simply does not offer a writer such freedom. You might be wondering if I tried getting my first book published the traditional way: The answer is
yes. You have no idea how shocked I was when it was accepted. I was sent a contract, and when I looked into the small print (I even had a lawyer-friend go through it with me) I decided there was something fishy about it, and so I declined their offer.

That’s when I stepped onto the path of self-publishing.

It felt safe and refreshing. More importantly, I felt my book was safe. As writers, our works become our babies, and we want to protect them and give them the best chance to thrive in the world. Selfpublishing seemed to offer that protection.

K. What have you published?
To date, I have self-published five books, all for the young adult (YA) audience, or younger. It is interesting to see – and I know this from reading the reviews and the personal feedback I get – that it is mainly adults that read my work. I can only assume it is because my books are not reaching their target audience; an undesirable aspect of self-publishing that you, the writer, is in charge of.
My first book, Waiting for Wings, was written as a gift for a friend’s family, when he died of cancer at the age of 22; another reason why I wanted to protect it from the jaws of the dishonest sharks. It tells the story of a 12-year old boy whose friend is dying of cancer, who one day says that he woke to find an angel at the foot of his bed (which my friend actually said, before he lost his speech).

I then went on to write a fable called The Girl with the Green-Tinted Hair. This is less than 9000 words in length, and is easily my most successful book. Why? It is free to download. The feedback is overwhelming, both on Amazon and on Goodreads. It has got into the hands of a decent amount of people (it is closing in on 500 ratings on Goodreads and has 67 reviews, both on amazon.comand all because it costs nothing to read. I treat it as my bait book, to get my name on readers’ “readar”.

K. How did you go about publishing your books?

I started out by using I have just checked their website, and they have clearly made it friendlier and more attractive since I last used it, nearly 10 years ago. They use a print-on-demand business model, which means that if they receive an order of 50 copies
of your book, they print 50 copies and send them out to the customers. You, the writer, don’t have to do a thing. Gone are the days when you fill your garage with boxes and boxes of copies of your own book, which, chances are, might end up being pulped. (Such a sad thought.)
I moved my books over to Amazon because of its impressive infrastructure. The business model is the same as Lulu (in terms of it being print-on-demand), but the truth is – and I’m sorry, Lulu, you were good to me – that more people shop on Amazon than they do on Lulu. That is a fact. Most people haven’t even heard of Lulu, but ask a friend where they bought their Christmas presents, and chances are Amazon will be on the list.

To get you started on Amazon as a self-published author, go to Amazon’s homepage, whether that be .com or etc and log in (assuming you have an account). Scroll to the bottom, and find the option that says either Self-Publish with Us (as it says on .com) or Independently Publish with Us (as it says on, and then all you have to do is follow their instructions.

They are constantly trying to make the process as simple as possible. It is all free (as is, but you can pay for additional services, such as editing, proofreading, and copy-editing, etc. (I personally haven’t used these services, but I do have a friend that has, and he was very satisfied with them.)

Here is an important point about self-publishing, one that needs to be taken very seriously: What you write and hit “publish” on, is exactly what your readers will download and keep, forever. Read that sentence again, in fact, no, I’ll put it in italics for you: What you write and hit “publish” on, is exactly what your readers will download and keep, forever.

You, not only as a writer, but as your own publisher are responsible for making sure that your book is as finely polished as it can be. Self-published books with many errors in them – such as sloppy “speling” mistakes, or the absence of full stops – is one of the reasons self-publishing has got a bad reputation.
Of course mistakes happen, but they shouldn’t be because of laziness or negligence. And anyway, why would you want to present your hard work in such a half-arsed way? You have got to become a perfectionist, because if you don’t your readers will pick up on it. Even something as simple as asking a friend to help proof-read it, can help go a long way to avoiding simple mistakes you may yourself miss.

K. Can you give us some advice on publishing with Amazon?
Let’s start with an ebook. I’ll briefly cover how to self-publish a paperback and audiobook later.

Cover design

  • Once you have completed the steps mentioned above, you will need to upload your work, usually as a Word file or PDF. I would strongly recommend only a PDF is used at this point, because PDF mirrors print exactly – that is what it was designed for. Word Docs are not designed to look the same on different mediums, or even different screens or computers. Once uploaded, you can go through your book just as it would appear on a Kindle or iPad. Here, you can again check for errors – and again, it is very important you do.
  • Then it comes to designing your cover. Amazon are forever updating and improving their templates for you to use. Some of them are pleasant, some aren’t. But it is about your personal taste at the end of the day, and what kind of cover you envision for you book.
  • I used Amazon’s templates for my first three books. I was happy with them, but as time went on I realized how unoriginal and cheap they looked. Having an eye-catching cover is important. We might not judge a book by its cover (at least we try not to), but a cover is usually the deciding factor of whether or not it jumps off the screen at us.
    We see thousands of images on a daily basis. We scroll and scroll, clicking only on what grabs our attention. You have got to try and create a cover that grabs the eye. Easier said than done. However, Amazon know this, and, like I said, they are always improving their templates.
  • The thing about using one of their templates is that other people can use them too. What could be more frustrating than finally publishing your book, only to scroll down and see a completely different title with the same cover! Not good. I have been there. It is for this reason that I used for The Girl with the Green-Tinted Hair, Happiness & Honey, and A Stolen Youth.
    • ‘Fiver’ is a website where people offer many services, including editing, digital marketing, translation, and graphic & design, i.e. book covers. And, just as the name of the website suggests, they do it all for a fiver (of course, you can also choose to pay more, depending on what you want).
    • It is used by people who are trying to build a substantial portfolio for their work, and so they are going to try their best to do a good job. You find someone who you like the look of (by reading their reviews, for instance), tell them what you want, upload a few samples of the covers you like (by sending them book covers from Amazon or wherever), and leave the rest to them.
  • When I received the cover for The Girl with the Green-Tinted Hair, honestly, my eyes filled with tears. I was so happy with it – and all for a fiver!


K. How do you price your books?
You don’t want to make your book too expensive. Simply do some research and see what others are doing. Do what feels right to you. Are you wanting to knock up the price of your book because you want fat pockets? Chances are you won’t be a household name, so setting your ebook at $9.99 isn’t advisable. However, something like $3.99 is much more sensible – and still a little on the pricey side.
Some have said the price reflects an assumption of the book’s quality. I am not sure if that is true. If your ebook is on sale at $1.99, it has an attractive cover, and the story is good enough to start gaining good reviews, then clearly that assumption is false.
(Word of advice: At the end of your book, ask your readers if they would kindly write a short review for you. Reviews are so important for any writer.)

Because you are in control, you can change the price at any time. Something you definitely don’t get to do when you publish traditionally. That being said, I would advise you not to change it too often, simply because you don’t want to annoy your readers.

My advice is to set the price of your book rather low, and treat it as a trial run. You can always change it 6-12 months down the road. Self-publishing really is all about trial and error. At least it has been for me.
Handy Tip: Amazon do not give you the option of giving your book away for free. Which makes sense, because they would make no profit. But what they will do, because it directly affects their reputation, is match the price of your book if it is cheaper on another site. If you want to make your book available for free, go to a website like draft2digital; go through the process of uploading your book, then set the price at $0. Contact Amazon and tell them that your book is available for free on Draft2Digital and you would like them to match the price. Hey presto, your book will appear on
Amazon for free.


K. How do you get paid for self-publishing?
Every month you will receive an email from Amazon, regarding your royalties. They will get paid straight into your account, completely hassle-free. I know a lot of people have had trouble with Amazon not paying them, but honestly, I have never had an issue.

Let’s briefly cover the process of self-publishing a paperback and an audiobook
As a self-published author, you get to publish one book in three different ways. That is, potentially, three streams of income from one source.

If you want to publish your book as a paperback, then simply head over to It’s owned by Amazon, so the process is very similar to publishing your ebook. Formatting can be a nuisance. I have published books where the print is extremely small, and, even now, I’m pretty certain there are big margins of empty space at the sides of the pages. It is not ideal.

It is worth remembering that Amazon sell many more ebooks than paperbacks.
Once you have finished going through the process of creating your paperback, hit publish, and it will be available on Amazon.

If you want to create an audio version of your book – and why wouldn’t you want to? – head over to Again, this is owned by Amazon. Now you understand what I was meaning before about their infrastructure. They have their fingers in many pies.
You upload a sample of your work, and then wait for narrators to send you samples of their auditions. You choose the one you like the most, leave them to narrate your book, they send you the entire thing, and once you are happy with it, you hit publish. Simple!
Now you have your one book available in three different formats. You don’t have to do any shipping yourself, and your royalties, from all three sources, get put straight into your bank account.

K. Sounds easy enough, so how has it gone? Have you made money on your books?
How much have I been paid since I published my first book in 2010? This includes five paperbacks, five ebooks, and three audiobooks. Drum roll…

Less than $1000.

If you went for a job interview, and were told that after a decade you will have earned less than $1000 in total, you would laugh and walk out of the room. But that is the reality of it. My most successful book is, as I have said, my free book. It is great to read the reviews. In fact, I was nearly moved to tears last weekend, when I read some of the ones I hadn’t seen before! But, chances are, those people downloaded the book for free, and so no money for me.

You may ask why I don’t increase the price (at least to 0.99!) but here is the thing: People get to know it because it is free. Amazon have a whole separate chart for free books, and there are far less contenders there, simply because there are less people willing to give away the work they have worked so hard to create. Which makes perfect sense.

It is a massive sacrifice. But I did it because I believe in the story, and I knew people would resonate with it. The most important thing is that people read it. And I have confidence that the book will one day reach enough people that it will begin to pay dividends. Overly confident, maybe?

I haven’t lost any money, which is a very important point. The process of self-publishing can be absolutely free. You choose how much you want to spend. If you don’t want to spend anything, then don’t. You really have got nothing to lose.

K. Do you plan to continue self-publishing or would you ever consider going traditional? Why?

I have three children’s picture books, and another 40,000-word YA novel that sit unpublished. And I don’t intend to self-publish them.

It is time for me to tackle the traditional route. Self-publishing has allowed me to build a
framework, such as reviews of my current books, a following on social media etc, all of which I hope will attract a literary agent, and subsequently a publisher.

A positive aspect of self-publishing is that you are in charge – and that very thing can be a negative aspect too. I have spent many, many hours going through the self-publishing process – getting it wrong, learning the hard way – when, all that time, I could have been writing.

Now I feel I have the patience to include the middle-man.
There are many success stories about self-published authors, selling thousands and thousands of their ebooks, but I am afraid mine isn’t one of them. The reality is, it is hard to get people to read your books.
But, and this is a big but: Your book deserves an audience. God knows how many hours you’ve put into it. It needs to be read, it calls to be read – its purpose is to be read by as many people as possible. If it is finished, and you are happy with it, you can have it available to people, all around the world, this afternoon. And that is pretty cool.
Whatever path you decide to go down, good luck. I wish you all the best.

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Gavin Whyte

If you are interested in more from Gavin or his books, check out his site here

So what do you think? Is self-publishing for you? Or are you planning on going more of the traditional path? Let me know in the comments!

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GOING LIVE and I want to hear from YOU!

Good morning Writers, Readers, Poets, and Caffine Addicts!
Just a reminder that I will be going LIVE with an awesome panel of authors in just about 3hours at 11am PST! FREE BOOK giveaway and tons of discussion about writing, editing, and publishing! 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
While I’ll be asking questions, I really want to hear from other writers too!

So how can you watch the livestream? On my homepage you will see my Facebook page on the right hand sidebar. Click that!


Once your on my Facebook page you will see the top pinned post. Click “Get Reminder” and then around 11amPST Be ready to watch, comment, question, and enjoy!


Hope to see you there! If you end up missing it, don’t worry! I’ll be sure to post a recap and some interesting thoughts I’ve had with this whole experience.

Happy Writing Everyone!