Alright guys, I did it. I successfully took the comments, compliments, and critiques from my two peer review readers and over the past four weeks, I have edited, revised, dissected, pulled apart, set-on-fire, re-arranged and re-written parts my manuscript.
I won’t lie, that was rough!
The most recent draft has nearly 4,000 words more than the previous draft which I believe to be a good representation of the amount of scholarship, development, and clarification I have added along the way. Beyond addressing any grammatical issues, I focused on developing and clarifying my overall argument as well as the individual arguments for each chapter. Also, due to reviewer request, I worked on inserting more outside scholarship to help substantiate my interpretations of The Hunger Games trilogy.
As hard as it was to read those criticisms, I am grateful for them, because I honestly believe that my book is better for it. I sent out my latest draft yesterday evening and am hoping to hear back from the publishers within a week to let me know that they have received it. After that, it will be another 6 to 8 weeks before I hear back from my third reader. Meanwhile, I’ll just be over here like . . .
I am praying that this reader will have a more favorable response to my improved draft! I would greatly appreciate your prayers as well in this matter as I now have to force myself to not focus on what they may say about my book. I am plagued by anxieties and self-doubts, but I will choose to focus instead on the positive. In the effort to stay optimistic, I wanted to share one of the kinder things one of my readers had to say about my book:
This text takes a different approach [to the series], considering the role of agency in the text . . . Unlike previous scholarship, the writer suggests that these novels can help readers identify opportunities for agency (empowerment) in their own chaotic contexts.
Great, you rock, girl! 😀 Now start working on the next book, if you haven’t already!
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Thank you so much Alice! I’ve sent out some queries for my next book (a children’s series) and I should hopefully hear back around December/January.
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Good work! Rooting for you!
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Thank you my friend!
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Goodluck with that!
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Thank you Sarah!
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Fingers crossed!🤞 good job getting it done!
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Thank you! I’ll take all the luck I can get. The publishers actually just got back to me and let me know that they have received my draft so here we go again!
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Good luck with it! Can I ask, as a scholarly look at The Hunger Games do you need to have read/watched the series previously? I’ve never watched or read any of the works, although my son really enjoyed the films, he’s not much of a reader.
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Thank you Ruby!
If you’re asking about needing to watch or have read the books to understand my book, the answer is yes. I do assume that readers will at least have a general knowledge of the books, characters, and plot. However, I do include a character/terminology list at the back of the book for anyone who needs a refresher. While you would still gain new insights from my book, you would definitely enjoy/appreciate it more with your own background experience with the series.
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Yay congrats on the good feedback! Also I really admire your positive attitude. Feedback is hard, but in the end, it makes us stronger writers.
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Hey Madeline, thank you! I won’t lie, having a positive attitude is hard. That’s part of the reason it took me so long to edit, I had to push past the negatively and self-doubt first. Writing is hard and accepting feedback is harder, but you are so right, it makes us stronger writers!
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Look at you go! Good that criticism helped you. I’ll be watching for that release date
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Oh, Dorinda, thank you so much for your support and encouragement! Having you, and others, here on WordPress encouraging me really made it easier for me to swallow my pride and accept the criticism and allow it to make me better. I’m gonna be watching for that release date also!
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You’re so welcome! This community is wonderful. We raise each other up because we know the struggle!! ❤
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Exactly! 🙌🏻
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Go get em, KaylaAnn!
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Thanks to your support, I can!
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😉
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Well keep us posted!
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I heard back from the publisher today, they have officially placed it with the third reader! So somewhere in the world, someone new is reading my book 😅
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Yay! 🎉
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Wow. You work so hard, Kayla. Outstanding!
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Thank you Ragazza! I’ve always been of the mind that if I want to reach my dreams, I have to be willing to work for them. Dedication and perseverance are necessary for any dream.
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Healthy criticism is always good. I hope you got good criticism.
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Hey Lavanya, I did get some great feedback! I got some rough criticisms as well, but it definitely improved my book.
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Awesome .. I must sit down with a cuppa and an empty house one hour and really ALL your posts. They are amazing. Why have I note found you before … damn it!!
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Awww Viola, your compliments are simply making my day! Thank you! I was just checking out your blog and I am also enjoying myself. I hope to see you on my reader more often.
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I’ve packed a fold up seat, a flask and EVERYTHING – try keeping me away 😃
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