Holding broken shards
Of a peacock-colored
Teacup
Alice said,
“Create a world of your own.”
But she never admitted
The catastrophe
Of her own
“Wonder”-land.
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Very nice. Makes one “wonder.” 🙂
–Michael
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Good to hear! Seems like I got my point across 😅
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Awsome The Cheshire cat.
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Yes ma’am!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you!
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Nicely written, Kayla Ann. ^_^ I love the picture.
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Thank you MissM!
Me too, I found it on one of those free picture websites and I knew it would fit perfectly with this poem
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Oh, oh – wondering what’s going to happen next. Well done KaylaAnn.
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Thank you Eugenia! I’ve always love Alice and Wonderland so it was fun writing a poem inspired by them
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I really love this poem, Kayla. Very interesting.
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Thank you so much! 🙂
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Pretty darn good writin’ there young un. ☺
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Thank you so much Walt! You encourage me to write more poetry!
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You’re very welcome! I hope you do! ☺
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Wow, this made me see Alice in a completely different light. Do you think she “goes to wonderland” because she seeks comfort, away from life’s troubles?
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Awesome, I was hoping to put a twist on the ordinary! I do indeed. Wonderland is an escape that proves that grass is not always greener on the other side
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