Ballerina spinning on uneven deck
Of tilting ship
Rotating and twirling, quick then slow
On rotting beams.
Ship swaying and swirling, dumping cargo
Over the side.
Nose numb and ears tingling with abandoned
Oblivion.
Wind howling and pressing determinedly
Against the ballerina
Tossing ship and dancer, slapping strands of hair
About her face.
Mast falling, sails tearing, and yet
She dances on.
But in my mind, the wind whips up the wave
Which swallows whole
Both the ballerina
And the boat.
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Such a powerful piece. Especially the last part.
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Thank you!
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😄😄😄👍👌
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Great imagery.
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Thank you, I was hoping to tell a story.
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Goodness, so evocative that I am left with the smell of the sea in my nostrils. Nicely done KaylaAnn! 🌹💕
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Why thank you Diana!!
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Perfectly penned!! I could see her dance and the ship sway and I blinked and they were gone. Powerful imagery!!
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Thank you Dorinda! You’ve really understood the fleeting instability I tried to weave throughout this poem!
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You did an excellent job! ❤
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A lovely tale full of imagery. Perhaps a tale of woe because where we stand goes atilt, therefore, challenging our stability.
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Eugenia thank you! I loved not only your compliment but your interpretation of this poem! You’re right on the money!
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This is a wonderful poem says the student to the teacher ☺❤
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No no, says the student to the student! We’re all just learning 🙂
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Amazing wordplay. 🙂
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Thank you!
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